by MidnightBlue » Fri Apr 13, 2012 1:48 pm
by Doc Hydrogen » Fri Apr 13, 2012 2:12 pm
by MidnightBlue » Fri Apr 13, 2012 4:12 pm
Doc Hydrogen wrote:Nicely done. A lot of that looks really good, but I would go a bit differently in places.
He is shown as having super-speed, but not anywhere near as fast as the Flash, unless he's flying. I'd also put in an explicit blast power because of his eye beams and the cold breath.
I like the Red Kryptonite write-up, but that doesn't pop up often enough to be a part of his datafile, in my estimation. I'd use what you have, because it's good, but to me it's not frequent enough to really worry about.
I would quibble the most with the Green Kryptonite and Magic limits. GK not only shuts down all his powers instantly, it also slowly kills him. I'd go with something like:
Green Kryptonite. Shutdown Kryptonian Heritage and gain 1 PP. Take d6 physical stress every round you are in the presence of Green Kryptonite.
This hurts him, and steps up any stress he has already or gains from kryptonite exposure.
As for Magic, I'd go with:
Vulnerable to Magic. You are defenseless against magic. You cannot use Durability or Stamina in action-reaction rolls against magic, and your Invulnerable SFX cannot mitigate stress from magical sources.
He literally has no defense against magic. He can punch a guy before he casts a spell, but once it's cast, Supes is owned.
In all, great write-up.
by konate » Fri Apr 13, 2012 6:25 pm
by EldritchFire » Mon May 07, 2012 7:37 am
MidnightBlue wrote:Oh great mods...could I get this thread moved to the fan-made datafiles subforum?